Self-Editing for
Fiction Writers: How to edit yourself into print. Yes, that is the title of a
book by Renni Browne and Dave King. A book I might add, that I ordered in part
out of curiosity and in part to see if I could truly put out a polished book
without the aid of a professional editor. Final answer? A big whopping ‘Don’t
Do It’! I’ll return to the book, but first let me go back…
I originally didn’t
use an editor. I wondered at the expense and whether or not I would be getting
enough of a return on sales to warrant shelling out a couple grand (give or
take a lot) on an editor. I looked into a few, but I wasn’t just after skill - I
needed a personality that worked well with mine. I was looking for a long-term
and loyal editor-author relationship. Finally I found an editor, or better she
found me through an interview I did. I had a desperate desire for an editor
with whom I could work, and not want to strangle because they demolished my
voice and everything real about my book. After she completed a sample edit for
me and we conversed a few times via email, I knew this one was a keeper.
It turned out that I
spent far more time attempting to self-edit, and my time is extremely valuable.
I was a top-notch English student in high school and university. I aced the
exams and wrote stellar papers. So no one was more surprised than me, when ten
years later, that stellar English student was now only mediocre. It was then
and there that I knew no author, no matter how adept at the written word,
should be without an editor. It was a long hard lesson on a winding and
confusing literary road to take, but I learned enough from the process to become
a better writer.
Back to the book!
Would I recommend reading it? Yes! Why you ask? It can help an author to
improve their writing because grammar and spellcheck on your computer just
won’t cut it. I especially like the chapter titled Sophistication where it mentions phrases used by hack
writers (I’ve learned the error of my ways). I also enjoyed the section titled Once is Usually Enough. As a
whole, the book is an easy read and one that any author could easily understand
(or should understand).
So what’s my final
take on self-editing? Do it! Wait, didn’t I just explain that an author
shouldn’t do it? No! Authors should complete a self-edit to the best of their
ability before it goes off to the professional editor.
Recap:
1. DO find an editor who is not only skilled
(make sure they prove their ability), but they should also be someone with whom
you can work easily. Keep it as stress-free as possible.
2. DON’T rely on your own skills, no matter how
many books you’ve read, for the final product. If you can’t afford an editor
and you have no choice but to self-edit your first book or two, work with
critique partners, read the editing books, work with reviewers and read and
reread your manuscript until it’s the best you can possibly make it. But word
to the wise—wait until you can hire a professional.
3. DO give yourself enough time to finish
the manuscript and have it off to the editor in order to meet your deadlines
(learned this one the hard way). Remember that you need time for rewrites when
it comes back with all the pretty red markups.
4. DON’T shrug off the editor’s suggestions
if those edits can make your book better. On the flip side, don’t just make the
edited changes without reading everything through.
5. DO have fun. What we authors do
should be fun or it’s not worth it.
Guest
post by MK
McClintock. MK McClintock was born on the west coast, but after less than
eight years she left with her family to the Rocky Mountains. After more
adventures around the country, business-college and culinary school, MK
McClintock found a place to call home in Montana.
Over the years MK
McClintock traveled the country and visited magnificent Scotland . She
dreams of a time when life was simpler, the land rougher and the journey more
rewarding. With her heart deeply rooted in the past and her mind always on
adventure, MK McClintock still calls Montana
home.
MK McClintock is also
the author of Gallagher's Pride, the first of her Montana Gallagher Series and
Alaina Claiborne, the first of her British Agent novels.
Book Information
Formats: Paperback and Kindle
Publisher: Trappers Peak Publishing
Release Date: August 1, 2012
Series: The Montana Gallaghers
Author Links
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Official Blog: http://mkmcclintock.blogspot.com
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advice for writers
editing
Gallagher's Pride
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MK McClintock
Self Editing
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14 Comments
The whole process is very interesting. Excellent advice.
ReplyDeletemarypres(AT)gmail(DOT)com
Marybelle--it is an interesting process! When I first edit a book I'm all smiles to see the changes. Then we get into the details of structure and my brain starts to hurt. Then comes the minute details of fixing punctuation and my brain really starts to hurt! At least the end result is worth it! Thanks for stopping by!
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ReplyDeleteThank you for hosting on this tour!
ReplyDeleteYou're very welcome. All the best with your book.
DeleteI agree with your posting about the self editing and using a professional editor. There have been some eBooks that I've read with so many grammatical or editing errors, that it was rather annoying or threw me out of the story.
ReplyDeleteJess1
strive4bst at yahoo dot com
Thank you SO MUCH, MK, for the writing advice! I'm horrible at grammar-- HORRIBLE!-- so if I were ever to try my hand at getting my novel published, I know I wouldn't be able to rely simply on myself, or it would be a hot mess! ;-)
ReplyDeleteYour tour has been amazing fun to follow! I wish you nothing but success!
justforswag(AT)yahoo(DOT)com
I think you may have given a lot of help to a lot of new writers. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteSounds very good.
ReplyDeleteBecky01x(at)gmail(dot)com
Thanks for being apart of the tour. Over the last few months I've seen the pros and cons to self publishing. I've learned that at times, it's difficult to take everything on your own shoulders.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
Vivien
deadtossedwaves at gmail dot com
As a reader, librarian, and someone with a Master's degree in English, nothing turns me off from a book more than poor editing. When I have to stumble over typos, grammatical errors, internal inconsistencies, etc., I just have to stop reading. While this does happen occasionally in a traditionally published and edited book, it's much more likely to occur in self-edited and self-published books. SO, I second your points. At the very least, writers should invest in professional editing.
ReplyDeletecatherinelee100 at gmail dot com
I did learn this one the hard way thinking I knew it all when going into this, but after working with a professional editor, I know why they do what they do and authors do what we do!
DeleteI love this post! I'm an editor and I can't agree more with your comment, "DON’T shrug off the editor’s suggestions if those edits can make your book better. On the flip side, don’t just make the edited changes without reading everything through." LOL. If I had dime for all those authors who just clicked "accept all" and sent them back. :) Anyway, good luck on your release. Love the cover. tchevrestt(at)yahoo(dot)com
ReplyDeleteThanks Tara! I remember thinking when I first started working with an editor that she really knew her stuff so all I would have to do is sit back and let her work her magic. Truth is, the book loses the author's voice if they simply accept everything. I found out that a month of edits is far more consuming than six months of writing, but it's definitely a necessary step.
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